It shows that you've put a lot of effort into this song. It's very good overall, put there are some serious problems you need to address. One problem is the faster parts sounded spastic. What I do with speedy notes (I sequence all my stuff too btw) is start the first note fortissimo then going pianissimo with the next and build my way back up to fortissimo and then back down and back up and continue like that. If done correctly it will give your speed ups more of a natural feel.